Thread:StrangerAtaru/@comment-23863-20170507134055/@comment-23863-20170507152048

Finding a way to work with the critical details including the material that connects with the later story should work. That was one of my main strategies when doing my own modifications to your work for Abarangers and other series before it, namely minor additions that avoids disturbing the flow too much, but still has important value to the plot (ex. in Hurricanger noting about Isshu finding out about his brother's condition so it would affect the plot later of Yosuke finding out).

So pretty much shortening sentences with fewer words or removing irrelevant info which does not affect the main plot should work.